Be Fearless

Be Fearless

1 chapter / 1188 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read


© Copyright 2013 Maryn Wosu

Melanie Archer has fast-fallen for a boy not knowing that she and him are more alike than normal. Fear of unleashing her power and loving irrelevantly consume her. But Travis is there to bring her back.

I put some thought into these names :)

Melanie: dark (she was stuck in a depressed state for a while). Love, rebellious (she hated being super-human, and almost killed herself because of it), it also means sun-ray or light (which is her power and her attitude at the end of the story.

Travis: strong (his power is super-strength, independent, crossing (I don't know about that one, to be honest).

Cover made by me!

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almost 5 years ago Animefan13 ✞ said:

Wow, awesome!


almost 5 years ago Clark Craemer said:

Nice descriptions! I like what you've done here! This is very detailed - I honestly wish my writings were this detailed!

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almost 5 years ago Natalie Anne said:

This is great! I love writers who are really descriptive, it really helps the reader get every detail of the story, and you do an excellent job of it. Keep it up! :)


almost 5 years ago Nolee Balaqua said:

Now, personally, I don't believe in love at first sight. I think that people never know who'll they'll end up loving, and cupid just sneeks up on you one day and shoots you. ANYway, this was nice! A little six minute story, sweet, funny, and lovely. Good luck in the contest! :) :) :)



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over 1 year ago Zoe Holloway said:

Just a few tips.

1. This was excellent writing, but I felt that it moved too quickly. Suggestions for this problem: Maybe try giving more information at the beginning, try having them talk, introducing themselves or just chatting.

2. Make her pain greater, she seemed to be attempting to kill herself because she couldn't control her powers and couldn't touch Travis like she would like to. Have her go into deep thought and make it more emotional, maybe she couldn't touch him at all or whenever he tried he'd be hurt, not just sometimes.

3. I like the idea of the soulmate thing, but it seems to be a bit exaggerated, it just seems like too much, make the story fut it or reduce the story a bit.

4. Great cover by the way :P

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almost 2 years ago K.T. said:

It was spectacular! The story of these two heartthrobs is literally a dream come true for them. I think that there could have been a teensy bit more explanation about their super-powers, and since the rest of it seems realistic, you could've maybe tried to make the powers themselves seem more realistic. Also, since the boy wasn't hurt severely by the powers, I don't think the ending was very realistic. If he had been hospitalized or in a coma for a while, I feel like it would make a bit more sense. But, overall, spectacular story! I give it a heart, blush, cry, and a wow! ;)