Be Fearless

Be Fearless

1 chapter / 1188 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

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© Copyright 2013 Maryn Wosu
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FOR BOUNDLESS CONTEST! GOAL IS 500!
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Melanie Archer has fast-fallen for a boy not knowing that she and him are more alike than normal. Fear of unleashing her power and loving irrelevantly consume her. But Travis is there to bring her back.
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I put some thought into these names :)

Melanie: dark (she was stuck in a depressed state for a while). Love, rebellious (she hated being super-human, and almost killed herself because of it), it also means sun-ray or light (which is her power and her attitude at the end of the story.

Travis: strong (his power is super-strength, independent, crossing (I don't know about that one, to be honest).

Cover made by me!

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almost 5 years ago Paige Johnson said:

The his skin a smooth chocolate...sounds odd because it's a fragment that seems like most are missing something. Sometimes fragments are needed, I get that, but yours sound off, like a "and I thought I might faint in ecstasy" would follow. Capital T in T-shirt because the T refers to the shape. Try switching up the beginnings of your sentences from I or Him. Pretty melodramatic, but what romance isn't? "peach sand" sounds so cute. Comma after I wonder. Though the pace was very fast, I guess it had to be.

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almost 5 years ago Josephine said:

I like that her emotions were believable. You didn't make this person who was flawless at controlling her powers and feel completely okay with it. She actually practices and feels afraid of her own powers. However I felt like you killed the mystery of the story when you just flat out told us that she was superhuman and whatnot. But that is just me. It was a good story and I thought their relationship was cute. Good luck in the contest.