I have to look PERFECT

I have to look PERFECT

1 chapter / 943 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

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Cover by Brooklyn Hunter

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over 4 years ago Aurora Sanders said:

This is so scary! It kind of reminds me of Estella and Miss Havisham in Great Expectations, don't know if you've read that or not. But really good!

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almost 5 years ago Krystal Fragoso said:

Love the idea and descriptions. It was a bit confusing, so just reread to fix that, otherwise great job!

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almost 5 years ago Garima Gupta said:

It's a little bit confusing, and there are some grammar errors and typos. However, I do like the basic idea of it! Keep writing and good luck!

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almost 5 years ago T. R. Nosyla said:

Your should clarify which character was speaking when. Other than that I liked the concept of the story! Keep up the good work!

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