Star-Crossed

Star-Crossed

1 chapter / 500 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

This Was For The PattersonContest but anyway at least it was a finalist cx so anyway I'm working on the non-contest version of this so patient my beauty's!

Genres:

Fantasy, Short Story

Comments(150)

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over 4 years ago Eredhion the Ranger said:

Whoa, awesome stuff! Well done!

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over 4 years ago Jake Olsen said:

I loved it nice and gripping, and to me perfect amount of detail. Loved all the action.

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over 4 years ago Rob said:

nice, you made FINALIST?

Oh yeah the other contest "Travel Contest" has begun...write another writing!

Drawing 9 out of 14

over 4 years ago Animal's Heart said:

O.o

Reviews(18)

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over 4 years ago Nicole Zamudio said:

You should definatly continue with this and put in more detail after the contest!!! It's sooo got and could go to new heights! Good luck!

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over 4 years ago Doris Hall said:

After the contest is over i think you should write a little more to it adding more details , but that's up to you.