20 chapters / 44655 words

Approximately about 4 hours to read


*IN PROGRESS* Are you sure you're 100% human?



over 4 years ago tiffany williams said:

A really interesting concept and narrative point of view, your descriptions are really good and full of detail and I think the story is very unique and different to most of those in similar genres. Can't wait for more.

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over 4 years ago L. R. Bauer said:

I just read the prologue and chapter one. This story is off to a great start! The meeting between the main character and the boy reminded me a bit of the meeting between Melanie and Jared in the book The Host. I think this story has a lot of potential. Great job and good luck on your writing!


over 4 years ago Bridget Gillman said:

I only read the first two chapters so far, but I'll come back later and read more. Great job! Some little things I noticed... It’s means “it is”, use its for when something belongs to it You should call the part at the beginning “prologue” or something like that, in my opinion It was a little unclear what happened to her with the Eli in the first chapter Keep going! I really like it so far.

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over 4 years ago Sally Balboa said:

I love your distopian world, its so intresting. I only read the prologue but from what i can tell, I already like your main character, shes tragic with out throwing a pity party.


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