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Approximately about 4 hours to read
*IN PROGRESS* Are you sure you're 100% human?
almost 4 years ago tiffany williams said:
A really interesting concept and narrative point of view, your descriptions are really good and full of detail and I think the story is very unique and different to most of those in similar genres. Can't wait for more.
almost 4 years ago L. R. Bauer said:
I just read the prologue and chapter one. This story is off to a great start! The meeting between the main character and the boy reminded me a bit of the meeting between Melanie and Jared in the book The Host. I think this story has a lot of potential. Great job and good luck on your writing!
almost 4 years ago Bridget Gillman said:
I only read the first two chapters so far, but I'll come back later and read more. Great job! Some little things I noticed...
It’s means “it is”, use its for when something belongs to it
You should call the part at the beginning “prologue” or something like that, in my opinion
It was a little unclear what happened to her with the Eli in the first chapter
Keep going! I really like it so far.
almost 4 years ago Sally Balboa said:
I love your distopian world, its so intresting. I only read the prologue but from what i can tell, I already like your main character, shes tragic with out throwing a pity party.
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