My Best Friend

My Best Friend

1 chapter / 50 words

Approximately less than 20 seconds to read

Description:

Childhood.

Genres:

Comedy, Memoir, Poetry

Comments(10)

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over 4 years ago Briana Winkworth said:

This was extremely short, but so meaningful. It's hard to believe how much imagery, and emotion you can place within that few of words. Good job!

Ps. Thank you so very much for reading/hearting my story. I really appreciate it :)

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over 4 years ago Jennifer Thornton said:

That's so cute x3 I like it.

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over 4 years ago Carlos Corbin said:

Haha, i think most of us can relate to this. Ah the joys of childhood, good work and thanks for looking at my work. ~Carlos

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over 4 years ago Kelly Woodard said:

Yes! I remember playing with my rubber ducks in the bath. Very cute. I really enjoyed this. :)

Reviews(1)

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over 4 years ago Huang Zi said:

This is cute, like the other people have said, but I feel like the last stanza threw off my rhythm. Maybe it's because I feel like in poetry, the word "cool" doesn't really belong... you have so many words to experiment with, so many rule breaking opportunities in poems and settling on "cool" seems... lame IDK?

I think this one's cute though :)