Miracle ✂

Miracle  ✂

6 chapters / 7489 words

Approximately 37 minutes to read

Description:

Uncompleted and will not be completed.
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Miracle's life takes a turn for adventure when she has a fateful dream recalling her father's location, even though he is presumed dead and has been missing for over a decade. On a whim, she travels where her dream takes her, along with her sometimes annoying but always loyal best friend, Levi.

But retrieving her father is not as simple as Miracle thought. Once she and Levi arrive in Richmond, Virginia, they are met by a mysterious teenager named Mason who is there for the same reason they are. As he claims to know where Miracle's father is, he takes Miracle and Levi to another, fantasy world where they must face trials and work together to get home alive.

Genres:

Adventure, Fantasy, Novel

Comments(39)

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over 1 year ago Hannah Whatley said:

This is a very good plot; I agree with Ryann in the last comment on the typos, but there were very few. Do you think you could maybe have her rely more on God? That would make for a really awesome story. The monsters sound like demons, so it would work. : )

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over 3 years ago Ryann J. Opsley said:

I like Miracle so far, but I found a typo or two and I've got some suggestions.

In Chapter Two, Miracle is talking to Levi and says " I had a dream last." Night should end the sentence.

I would've liked to know more about Levi before they departed on their adventure. (Chapter 3) I also would've liked to know more about Miracle prior to the story. Perhaps a prologue involving her childhood?

Other than that, Miracle is great so far, the story pulls me in and makes me want to keep reading.

-Ryann

Ps: could you read This is to the Moments?

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over 3 years ago Rugby Adams said:

This was soooo good!!! I was encased in the story. I'm only able to read the first chapter but I will continue later, this was amazing!!

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over 4 years ago Mermaid Maddie said:

Haven't read this(yet), but I love how your names are real words and are so unique.

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over 2 years ago Colette [Rook] said:

I love it! There's so much intrigue! I wish you would continue it. =( The way you opened your story was really cool and it instantly caught my attention. I accidently hit post before this was done, so apologies for that. I seem to be very accident prone with the keyboard.

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over 2 years ago Colette [Rook] said:

I read the first chapter and