The Autumn Queen

The Autumn Queen

1 chapter / 1188 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

Description:

Faylin's life has always been planned, but it's not a plan she wants to follow.

Comments(7)

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over 4 years ago Si Jia said:

I really enjoyed the detail and it was pretty creative. I didn't see many grammatical issues. Nice tone, style, and diction. Great job and keep it up!

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over 4 years ago Emma Katherine said:

I know a lot of people are saying this, but i really like your work, you did a great job. I love how you jumped right into the story! keep writing

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over 4 years ago J.A.D. Lumanta said:

If I could heart this a hundred more times, I would. Hahahah anyway, again, very well done! :)))))

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over 4 years ago J. Li said:

I enjoyed this story a lot! Overall, it was definitely well written, amazing how you fit a full length story with many supporting characters and a creative setting in less than 1200 words. Very unique names for the characters too. Fantastic job well done!

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over 4 years ago J.A.D. Lumanta said:

Mallory, I absolutely positively LOVED this story. I loved how you just jumped right into the plot. Sometimes, some authors end up tripping on their own words and the story ends up crumbling, but you were able to skillfully pull us in and build your story very well. This is one of the best entries I've read because it was very creative, intriguing, and beautifully well written. I hope you turn this into a full length novel soon because I'm just dying to read more! Bravo! I wish you the best in the contest! :))))))))