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Approximately 23 minutes to read
A story where YOU choose the outcome! You wake up in a white room and don't remember getting there. You need to escape. It's up to you to find the way out.
about 1 year ago Ava Rae said:
I got it the third time :D LOL
over 1 year ago Trinity Aster(hiatus) said:
Is it fine if I attempt to copy this, like make my own interactive short story?
On Page 14 you say. "I will never tell you." I say. Since you are working in second person it should be. "I will never tell you." You say. Really good. Please write more!
about 3 years ago Avitaille said:
Yay! I did it!
Well written! I can tell you worked hard! Just so you know, it was worth it!
I love your writing! I'm a big fan. You have a very creative mind. PLEASE keep it up!
Also, I love how your grammar is nice and almost always correct (as far as I know!). Beautifully written story with a hint of challenge, but I didn't give up! ;)
over 3 years ago V. L. Thornton said:
One problem; # 15 is the stairs. Not a long corridor.
over 4 years ago Robin Chapman said:
I absolutely love this! So unique and a joy to read. All your time and hark work definently shows!