Personality Makeover

Personality Makeover

22 chapters / 24147 words

Approximately about 2 hours to read

Description:

Jasmine is just one of the guys...until her dad tries to ship her off, that is.

Genres:

Adventure, Drama, Romance

Comments(12)

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almost 5 years ago Ty Dilancy said:

Wow, okay, so I just decided to randomly read this, and I'm really glad I did. This is FANTASTIC! I love the plot and I fell in love with the characters from chapter 1. (Sonny and Tyler are great, :P) So, you should definitely write more, because I want to know how it ends. Two things though, One, there's a LOT of kissing. Idk if you want that much, but I think if you just let that accent certain moments instead of kyle and Jaz making out twice every chapter, idk. it might be a little bit better, being that they always start small, but never end that way. Catch my drift? Two, you should add more skateboarding. :D Idk if you're actually a skater girl or not, but... well, it's your decision. I'm kinda a sucker for skateboarding. Anyway, Great Job!! -Ty :)

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over 5 years ago Jasper said:

HEY! Okay, wow! I loved the heroine, I thought she was really cool, loved all the dialogue especially because you could tell that you'd thought about it very carefully and it just helped develop their characeters a lot! I love all her mates, all the boys seem really cool and I like the way they're all so unique. Keep Writing! I want to read the rest!

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almost 6 years ago Callie Shae said:

HURRY UP AN' WRITE MORE!!! :))

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almost 6 years ago Samantha Dowe said:

There has to be a LOVE button on this piece!

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