Catching the Lion's Eye

Catching the Lion's Eye

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At a ball held by King Louis of France...


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almost 5 years ago Padfoot said:

Thank you so much for your comments! I'll definitely re-read this and fix some things. But actually, a page is a sort of errand-runner for a king or other royalty, and because lords is plural, it wouldn't be capitalized in this case. Thanks for reading! :)


almost 5 years ago Ari Elizabeth said:

I really love how creative you were in this! The title is also amazing. But there was some grammar mistakes you should clean up. First of all Page should be Paige and it should be capitalized as it is someone's name. Another thing was i think lords should be Lords, because they are names. I can't remember all the things I saw but there was a lot of capitalization. Just do a quick re read edit and you'll be good to go! :)