Him

Him

1 chapter / 112 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

It's funny because this poem was originally written about a friend of mine (girl) who has a two-faced personality... but then it turned into this!

Genres:

Writing, Poetry, Romance

Comments(18)

Lying

over 5 years ago Juliet Gordanier said:

wow

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over 5 years ago Lexi said:

This is so good. Great job! :) -Lexi

Horse-riding

over 6 years ago krystelle faulkener said:

I really love the imagery and ideas you bring to mind with your words :3

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over 6 years ago Natalie Harper said:

This is so beautiful! I love it so much!!

Reviews(4)

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over 6 years ago Osoo Gilbert Reagan said:

Its good this was your best poem, but i didn't like it much, not i a grudge kind of way, in a proffesional sense. You have to make your poetry to be in a manner such that if someone reads it in a bored mood, they enjoy it, if they do so in a sombre mood, they still enjoy it. Not that yours is not enjoyable, you could make it more enjoyable. I love the flow of idea though, how one can be wronged but still go back to the wrong doer time and time after.

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over 6 years ago Milan . said:

Very nice job!

I really liked how you kept comparing stuff to fire/hot stuff, I guess.

Very short and captivating. Nice job and keep writing!

-Pippa Sky