Shards of our Love

Shards of our Love

1 chapter / 714 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

A futuristic love story gone wrong...

Comments(41)

Wynter nicolette (husky)

over 3 years ago Wynter Nicolette said:

Oh my gosh!!!! Oh, BROKEN by the way. I liked how you portrayedher emotions for Jakob. That's how you spell it, right? I think so. Anyways, I iked it and it was one of the better stories on Figment.

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about 4 years ago Twilight Stevens said:

This was an amazing read. Beautifully written and amazingly well conveyed emotion xoxox

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about 4 years ago Sonia Morales said:

Wow this was a well written and chilling story. Wonderful.

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about 4 years ago Jessie Allison said:

The intensity of this was great! Especially since you could portray it in such a short piece! Great job!

Reviews(7)

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over 3 years ago MonoSpectator said:

~Broken~

Wow, I really enjoyed this. I usually am not very good with reading first person-types of stories, but this was easy to read and very interesting! The counting scene at the end was a nice touch, as was what happened at the very end. The description was lovely. I feel like you could have put a bit more detail into the area of where this takes place, but overall it was enjoyable. I loved how Quentin tricked her in the alley though. I wasn't expecting it!

Very nice story :D

Davidsbdaybefore

about 4 years ago clary gray said:

Wow. This is actually amazing. I really don't know what to say. The structure of your story was really interesting, the whole use of one letter per line etc. And the description was really interesting. God, I wished she'd shot Quentin instead. For the length of your story you've also done a great job of making the characters seem realistic. Usually, I try and give constructive criticism, but I can't here. What a great story!