The Color of Love

The Color of Love

2 chapters / 1553 words

Approximately 8 minutes to read

Description:

*WINNER OF THE FIRST LOVE CONTEST* There is one rule you absolutely must follow: you never forget your first love and you never forget what it taught you.

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over 2 years ago CookieBlarg said:

Wow... Beautiful. Amazingly- written and great insight on the real-world comparison.

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almost 4 years ago Shanav Mehta said:

So, I thought it was a good piece...short...but a good ending. I think this could be a really great prologue to a novel or a novella. Especially since you've described three things that she learned about love, which could use a lot of explanation and exploration. However - and I'm not really one to say much about love - but I found it slightly astonishing that a twelve year old girl was going through what could easily be described as teenage, or maybe even adult love. I also found the fact that she changed her perception of the colour blue, because of his eyes, a little vague. Maybe it could've been expanded upon a little. Again, this is my critique on the piece that you entered in the contest. Which brings me to my last point: the chapter division. This is just some advice, it's up to you to incorporate it: I really think you should put up the edited piece as the first chapter, so that the reader doesn't land up feeling that he's reading the same piece again (especially since the edited one comes second). Otherwise, a good piece of writing