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5 chapters / 7165 words

Approximately 36 minutes to read

Description:

Abused, neglected, and pregnant, Sarah McArthur runs away from home with her little brother Dillon. She collapses on a bench in a far city hungry, cold and all alone but then a myseterious man named Jasper Morris appears, asking for her hand in marriage in order to keep her and her brother from starving to death.
In the crazy Kingdom with all kinds of restrictions, how will the newlyweds fare? Will the cynical Sarah learn to love? What will happen when Jasper's secret is discovered? Read on to discover the strange twist on a typical love story.

Genres:

Drama, Romance, Novel

Comments(6)

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almost 6 years ago Janet said:

This story is just amazing, it is original and I just love the characters. I can't wait to read more, you've cleverly woven in some open questions to keep the reader wondering what is going to happen. Great job!

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almost 6 years ago Carrie S Faber said:

this is awesome nice job :)

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over 6 years ago Julia Joules said:

I only read the first chapter, but I just can't read any more. I don't like this piece. How old is Dillian supposed to be? Because he's dialogue doesn't really sound realistic to me. Also, when you describing the man you say in like the second sentence of his description that he's handsome. Clearly, a lot of stuff's just happened to her and she's crying on a park bench. So when a creepy man walks over and calls her pathetic, basically the first thing she thinks is that he's handsome? And then the plot just losses all realisticness. I man, you could atleast have a small paragraph of thought, or some rationale, or more explanation before suddenly marrying your main character. I'd also consider adding a little more description about the setting.

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over 6 years ago Tom "JellyBean Sjöden" Stack said:

Very good. It got a little weird at the end but the beginning was amazing. You also spelled, it's, wrong. You spelt it, i'ts. Other than that this was very powerful. Another thing, did she know the guy? Maybe try to elaborate on that. It's a little confusing.

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over 3 years ago nprotundodSXK said:

I only read the first chapter, but I just can't read any more. I don't like this piece. How old is Dillian supposed to be? Because he's dialogue doesn't really sound realistic to me. www.hermesi.com

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almost 5 years ago Jaspen Song said:

Wow, i thought this was great. Don't listen to little miss hater in the comments section, she's just being mean. If you don't read the whole story, at least do not blame the author when you do not get it. It would be great if you could read one of my works (or more!) just flip through the titles until you find one you think is interesting. Reviews and comments are appreciated. You should really continue this idea, because it is really interesting and i would love to read more.