I clicked because of the title, expected it to be some humorous take on math. Although it was not what I expected, I was not disappointed at all. I love what you did with the piece.
This was so deep, a little dark, and very very powerful. Absolutely beautiful. I love the poem throughout the story. If you do swaps, could you please read "You Killed Me" and give me your honest feedback and a heart if deserved? If you don't do swaps, I'm sorry for asking.
Wow... what a heartrendingly emotional story. Your character has so much depth; I can sympathize with him wholly. I suppose I'm a 'genius' too (IQ of 169, etc, etc.) so I can relate.
A very powerful story - though not exactly much going on plot-wise, something you manage with delicate eloquence. The poem you write between paragraphs is also great. I liked that touch; added an extra depth to it.
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2 months ago Autumn said:
I clicked because of the title, expected it to be some humorous take on math. Although it was not what I expected, I was not disappointed at all. I love what you did with the piece.
3 months ago Sarah G said:
This was so deep, a little dark, and very very powerful. Absolutely beautiful. I love the poem throughout the story. If you do swaps, could you please read "You Killed Me" and give me your honest feedback and a heart if deserved? If you don't do swaps, I'm sorry for asking.
5 months ago Wendy R. said:
heartbreaking, amazingly written but this story really plays with your heartstrings
7 months ago Hayley Finetti said:
Oh my god, I don't even know what to say. Breathtaking. Deep. Dark.
Amazing.
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7 months ago Timothy Turpin said:
Wow... what a heartrendingly emotional story. Your character has so much depth; I can sympathize with him wholly. I suppose I'm a 'genius' too (IQ of 169, etc, etc.) so I can relate.
A very powerful story - though not exactly much going on plot-wise, something you manage with delicate eloquence. The poem you write between paragraphs is also great. I liked that touch; added an extra depth to it.
11 months ago The Epic Merp said:
WOW! I am the school 'genius' so i can relate. This was epic, with a haunting air throughout the whole thing and a very chilling ending, keep it up!