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Amara had a really big secret she'd never gotten to tell Lucas.Captivating cover done by Megan N.!
over 3 years ago Elizabeth623 said:
I loved the beg. write more? oh can u read mine now.
about 4 years ago ~Mina~ said:
I liked that you started off with her visiting lucs grave! Great job overall, captivating and sad at the same time, good luck
about 4 years ago Erin Marie said:
Wow, sweet but very sad. It's well developed considering how short of a story it is. Good luck in the contest :)
about 4 years ago Neverland said:
This is amazing!!!!
about 4 years ago Ava2121 said:
It's very sad. However, I did like it. It's cliche...but in a good sort of. I though it was rushed, but that's understandable since you do have a time limit :) Hopefully you can expand a little more later. I did notice grammactical errors, but you can correct them.
about 4 years ago Regan said:
Sad story but slightly cliche. I agree with the previous reviewer who stated you could have added more "meat" to the plotline. Overall it was heartbreaking, in a good way.