Blood on the Other Side of the Rainbow

Blood on the Other Side of the Rainbow

11 chapters / 5594 words

Approximately 28 minutes to read

Description:

*incomplete* this book is not finished
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Michael is a 16 year old boy going through high school. The problem is he has a secret crush on someone that is-by society-forbidden in a sense. He has a gay crush.
As he foolishly follows his crush no matter what, he will soon find what darkness awaits for his dumbstruck love. All he wants now is to escape.
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This contains content that may not be appropriate for some viewers. If you are under the age of 13 please understand this is not suitable for you!!!
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Warning: blood/gore/profanity
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Cover by Brooklyn Schroedor

Comments(22)

Photo on 2013-11-06 at 13.47 #3

over 4 years ago Katie Gontier <3 said:

What's the access key? :P

Photo on 2013-11-06 at 13.47 #3

over 4 years ago Katie Gontier <3 said:

ANYTHING!

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over 4 years ago Ethan Sanctimony said:

... anything? :P

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over 4 years ago Katie Gontier <3 said:

NO NO NO NO NO! Write more. more more more more. please more. please. I'll do anything for you. PLEASE?!!!???

Reviews(21)

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over 4 years ago nikki woolums said:

I read all the chapters! And my only critiques are you should show a little more of Michael and Collin relationship before he's turn into a vampire that way the reader feels more invested into collins betrayal of Michael. And also I love that the main character is gay because there are not a lot of books centered around a gay character so that makes your book stand out. But there are people out there that well... don't support gays so you need to add more to Michael, show us more about him, who he is what he likes to do, hobby etc.. so that those people will like his character even after they find out he's gay. Last thing is the crypt scene I think it's cliche. Maybe you can have the turning scene take place in a unsuspecting place. Like in a bookstore or a library etc.. because Collin and Lucas wouldn't want to blow their cover and quite frankly you have two vampires patrolling a cemetery it just doesn't seem smart for vampires. But other than that I love your book and think you have a unique plot line. And I can't wait to read to see what happens to Michael next!

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over 4 years ago Ethan Sanctimony said:

;~; promise to try and do more since it'll be summer and what else do I have to do? ;)