Book I: Three ghosts for Anastasia

Book I: Three ghosts for Anastasia

23 chapters / 79994 words

Approximately about 7 hours to read

Description:

"COMPLETED" Anastasia has a secret; see can see ghosts. But not only that. She is working for Marco, a Grim Reaper of Death Inc. But whathappens when three ghosts, a Greek soldier, a Japaneese samurai and an Indian shaman decide to haunt her in order to find a way to move on? Anastasia will also have to deal from now on with her studies and the romance that might occur (?) A story based on Thessaloniki.

Genres:

Comedy, Romance, Novel

Comments(6)

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over 4 years ago Melanie Preston said:

This was a great story. I enjoyed the beginning greatly. *smiles*

There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major.

Overall, you did a fantastic job with this.

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over 4 years ago Kira Martin said:

Your dialogue needs commas. Ex: “‘I love Doctor who,’ said Kira.” Or “‘Don’t blink,’ he cautioned.” See? It’s a fairly common mistake. I didn’t know this until someone pointed it out a year ago… but like this “‘Well, I guess this is goodbye.’ He moved to hug her farewell. ‘I’ll miss you.’” The action is its own sentence. Anyway, sorry if that’s confusing. Otherwise, this was a cool idea and you made the beginning suspenseful in way to pull someone in. Keep writing!

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over 4 years ago CrazyDino said:

U must write more i loved it!

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over 4 years ago Ignorant-to-Life said:

Ahh!! More :)

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