Alpha

Alpha

1 chapter / 466 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

I am threatened by a weak, insubordinate wolf who thinks he can run my pack better than me. Will I allow it? No. I will fight.
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Comments(11)

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over 4 years ago Katie ZaBAM said:

GREAT description. The plot was so riveting, and I felt like I was right there in the story. Good job and keep writing!

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over 4 years ago Theresa Rose said:

I liked this, I thought you wrote it really well and it was interesting to read this kind of a perspective. Nice job!

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over 4 years ago Sierra said:

This was a nice wolf story that I enjoyed! Of course, the fighting sequence was my fav, just like everyone else's :D It was enjoyable to read and interesting to see what could be going through that wolf's mind against the weak challenger.

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over 4 years ago S.C. Weng said:

This is amazing. But I am a bit confused. Was this in the perspective of a real wolf or a human in wolf form. Other than that, I loved the fight because of all the detail you put in it. Good job and keep writing!

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