The Truth hurts

The Truth hurts

1 chapter / 162 words

Approximately less than a minute to read


If any of you actually know the allegory of the cave, kudos to you.


Writing, Drama, Poetry



about 6 years ago KenWah Teo said:

the concept was nice. so i don't know if you meant to repeat truth and hurt so frequently. i think you did. and i'd say to improve on that, make it more consistent before bringing about the change in the last stanza. that would make it more effective(:


over 6 years ago deepshikha said:

I'm not quite sure whether I caught the allegory, but I loved how you conveyed your feelings.

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over 6 years ago Philosopher Jet said:

I feel your pain. I know you are talking about Socrates reference. Please feel better and hang in there.


over 6 years ago Tom "JellyBean Sjöden" Stack said:

Very real and painful. Many of us have experienced this before. Have you gone through something like this before? You don't have to answer that. I really liked this. I could feel the emotion in your writing. Well done.


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over 4 years ago Sophie Paige said:

I like it, great job!