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If any of you actually know the allegory of the cave, kudos to you.
over 5 years ago KenWah Teo said:
the concept was nice.
so i don't know if you meant to repeat truth and hurt so frequently. i think you did. and i'd say to improve on that, make it more consistent before bringing about the change in the last stanza. that would make it more effective(:
almost 6 years ago deepshikha said:
I'm not quite sure whether I caught the allegory, but I loved how you conveyed your feelings.
almost 6 years ago Philosopher Jet said:
I feel your pain. I know you are talking about Socrates reference. Please feel better and hang in there.
about 6 years ago Tom "JellyBean Sjöden" Stack said:
Very real and painful. Many of us have experienced this before. Have you gone through something like this before? You don't have to answer that. I really liked this. I could feel the emotion in your writing. Well done.
almost 4 years ago Sophie Paige said:
I like it, great job!