Heaven's Dry Tears

Heaven's Dry Tears

1 chapter / 150 words

Approximately less than a minute to read


Know the difference. I do not own the cover, or the character that the actor plays.


Writing, Romance



over 4 years ago Briana Colfer said:

Mmm, nice imagery and flow. I liked the end about it being the impersonation not actor that made her act that way.Good job!


over 4 years ago Alex M. Stache said:

Dang. You have a way with words. And it flows so nicely too. Great job! Sorry for taking so long...


over 4 years ago Winter Rose said:

Ohhh, reality and fiction. I see what was done. I loved your word choice!


over 4 years ago dana said:

Super cool plot



over 4 years ago Liz Peterson said:

Wow. First off, are you talking about someone who is writing the screenplay for Supernatural and that they like Dean? If I interpreted that wrong, sorry, but I just thought I asked. Now, back to your piece. I really like that hot/bothered feeling you gave your character. My favorite lines were definitely, "I'm not entirely a saint" and the last line: "Twas the impersonation, not the actor, that drove me to wax lyrically." Overall this was a really well-written piece and I love the honesty of your MC. Great job! And best of luck! :)


over 4 years ago Madison Hoffman said:

I'm glad she's not a saint, that would be entirely too boring. The 2nd and 3rd paragraphs are wonderful examples of how lovely purple prose can be when it's done right. There's a misspelling ('spurn') you might like to fix. Maybe it's just me, but it took me a few reads to understand exactly what was going on in the story, that this was an actress working with a famous actor. Some more description about that would be nice. Good luck in the contest!