You said you made me stronger

You said you made me stronger

1 chapter / 324 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

A random poem. This isn't real, if anyone was wondering. I just typed away and created it out of no where...

Genres:

Poetry, Drama, Writing

Comments(22)

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about 4 years ago Matthew Bearden said:

This is touching and wrote so well you did an amazing job and this is one of my favorites of yours.

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over 5 years ago Rachie said:

That was really great, and I'm usually not a big poetry fan. Amazing!

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over 6 years ago Hotaru Rose said:

I really liked your cover for this. :) It really drew me in and made me want to see what this poem was all about. Anywho, I like, LOVED this poem in case you were wondering. It was so descriptive, the emotions so very real, it made me sad to read this, which is a good thing! (I think....) Haha, well, I will now be looking at more of your stuff, because this piece was so beautiful, it made me want to read more of your poetry.

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over 6 years ago Layla said:

This was incredible. Very relatelable like all the others have said.

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over 6 years ago TheaLynn said:

This really did make me cry. I actually dealt with the whole boyfriend leaving then coming back and tearing you apart just to make you feel worthless even though they claim to make you better. This expressed my inner thoughts and feelings and I am glad you didn't have to really experience this because it feels terrible. This was very good and well written for someone who hasn't felt the feeling before. You really were able to express feelings and imagery. One tid-bit of advice I will give you is to work on punctuation, just because a lot of poets will use commas and periods if there are longer stanzas. All-in-all, Well done! I can't wait to hear more from you!

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over 6 years ago XxxSuzyQtyxxX said:

r u sure this isnt real?