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*WORK IN PROGRESS* a story of a time traveler who goes back in time over and over again to fix his past and save his future. (It's a rough description but that's more or less one of the things it's about.)
almost 4 years ago StayStrong_16 said:
I love this!! It's written with so much feeling and passion:)! I felt like I was a part of the story!! It was beautiful! I myself think that if you were a illusionist, it would be harder to forget someone, cuz they would be there for your illusion for a short period of time, and then they would disappear once again, after the illusion was over, leaving you even more emptier than before! You did a great job of expressing this in your piece, which is why I really enjoyed it:) Anyways I did my part of the swap and read and hearted it so please do the same for my story a path in the woods and comment if you have any suggestions or some things u liked or whatever:) Thx and nice story!
almost 4 years ago Theresa Rose said:
This is really good! Nice concept and it had good flow! I also liked the descriptions in here. You have anice writing style that's easy to read without being to simplistic. Very good! Nice job!
almost 4 years ago Amaryliss White said:
This is amazing! Your writing is superb and I held onto every word. Great job!
almost 4 years ago Epiphany M. Hunter said:
I thought this was an interesting story. I think I got a little lost, and at times I think your verb tense changed. But the descriptions were nice and I think the writing was dramatic. Well done.
almost 4 years ago Elizabeth Prower said:
I like the concept. The detail was good, but I would have liked for you to go further in depth. Where does the protagonist's time-traveling ability come from? But you're off to a good start. I want to read more.