The Kidnapped Kidnapper

The Kidnapped Kidnapper

1 chapter / 114 words

Approximately half a minute to read


Short Story



over 4 years ago Patty Pimperstin said:

Hearted yours! & congrats on participating in the Kidnapped contest! If you want to swap, please check out my story, "Gills," on my page & heart it if you like it! :)


over 4 years ago Addison Boone said:

very interesting idea and your detail is very unique and vivid!


over 4 years ago Air'rik Milosavich said:

This is really good!


over 4 years ago Garima Gupta said:

Lol, I love this! Even though it was short, it was hilarious. This was a great idea!



over 4 years ago Sara NS Francis said:

First of all: I have no idea where the swords and octopi came from, I thought he was in a van! For a piece this short, it's best to cut back on the really deep descriptions (not saying that there shouldn't be any.) it honestly just made have to read through it three times to figure out what you were talking about. Grammer: you tense shift, going from past to present and back and forth and back and forth.... any way it's pretty easy to fix. Good luck.


over 4 years ago vivian doyle said:

Are you sure you don't write for Dexter?