Pink Skies

Pink Skies

1 chapter / 711 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

Finalist in the What If? Unbreakable Short Story Contest. ~ What if the sky was pink? (5/12/13)

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about 1 year ago Alexandr Lukin said:

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about 1 year ago Super Snowbox said:

Very well-written. It is interesting and useful to read and not only me. ShowBox The largest library of movies and TV shows online.

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almost 3 years ago Rachel D. said:

Oh my gosh this is overflowing with sweetness! I really want to read more like this. Nice work!

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over 3 years ago Cait Cher said:

Aw, this is the cutest thing I have ever read.

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about 2 years ago Kira Tao said:

I love how you wove the words together. And the characters are very convincing, especially Marjorie. It's so, so cute!

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almost 4 years ago Just Passing By said:

Hey! I found this story after stumbling across your "Question Hut" forum(which I think is really nice thing that you made). Anyways, your story was a wonderful and realistic read! However, I agree with the other reviewers that it lacks a clear purpose or message other than childhood imagination/innocence. If you just wrote this as a fun story/ submission for the contest, then i guess leave it as it is. But, I encourage you to develop it more as I think it could be a wonderful short story or children's book !