The Elementals

The Elementals

1 chapter / 1199 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

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Prompt: In 1,200 words or fewer, write a story about two people who are in love despite their differences.

This is a heart-based contest so hearts are super really appreciated :)

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Red eyes

over 4 years ago Jai said:

rode*

Red eyes

over 4 years ago Jai said:

This was beautiful and completely unique. I was entertained through-out and rose the wave of emotions with the characters. I noticed a run-on sentence ( starts with "I watched the ballerina with squinted eyes..."), but not much else. so that's always a plus ^^ any way great piece~ ^^

Hawkeye

over 4 years ago Abby McGrath said:

Whoa! I've never read anything like it before! It's so surreal and magical- I absolutely love it!!! I love that it's just a girl watching all this happen, seeing a circle. It's so awesome!!!

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over 4 years ago Nina V. Rye said:

What a strange (in a good way!) little story. I enjoyed it, although the plot reminded me of one of the old childhood stories and I am not sure if it was done intentionally or not. Wonder why the little tree man wore Russian dress? :) It was very nice.

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over 4 years ago Q said:

oh. my. goodness. gracious. This story made my cry man tears. Deep buttery man tears of buttery goodness. Like man magazine blended with tears pouring down my cherubic face. It was heartwarming. It was full of flawed characters and a decent story. I love my Christmas tree too. Thank you for the story. I shall give you a heart

Noname

over 4 years ago Vee Gretzinger said:

Wow, this was really good! I liked how you didn't stick with the typical "love" theme. You took it to a totally different direction, so kudos to that. Also, I loved your descriptions. They really helped me picture everything perfect. Honestly, I felt like I was there. Very good job! I would love to read more of your stories :)