Gills

Gills

1 chapter / 1190 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

Description:

Lila attempts to break things off with her not-so-normal boyfriend, Shade. Key word: attempts.

Comments(148)

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27 days ago Calli said:

amazing

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about 4 years ago Scarlett Rosalie Mikaelson said:

Really good! Could you please spare a moment and read my story Go To Sleep? It's for the Scary Story contest. Thank you!

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over 4 years ago John Collins said:

Wow that was great it felt like I was reading a James Patterson novel. It kept my eyes on it from the moment I started.

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over 4 years ago brooke littman said:

OMG I'm so sorry! I feel horrible! I'm sorry! I read your story forever ago and never signed in to heart and comment. Anyway, I reread it and have finally come to review the story. So, I thought this was so cute and adorible! I love her boyfriend by the way. (:

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over 4 years ago Hana Rose said:

This was fabulous! I loved every moment of it - congratulations, you've earned yourself a new follower :3 your descriptions were great, the characters were very well developed, and the storyline is really intriguing so far. Can't wait for you to write more!

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over 4 years ago Eric Fontaine said:

I'm not familiar with romance stories and usually try to avoid them. However, variety is the spice of life, as they say, and I thought to return the favor (a month late). Having said that, the plot was somewhat typical. A normal girl falls in love with a paranormal boy and they deal with trials and adventures. Story aside, your style is good and I read the entire selection without actually realizing it. It flowed well and the dialogue seemed decent (though I am no expert on dialogue). I think if you broke away from the typical plotline and "upset the established order", you could create something greater.