Polar Opposites

Polar Opposites

1 chapter / 1856 words

Approximately 9 minutes to read

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My entry for the Red Moon contest. Hope you like it!

So, I came back to this. Maybe when I finish it'll be a little better.

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over 4 years ago Kionna Chase said:

I loved it. A little part of me lit up with happiness when I read this. Especially that closing paragraph had to be my favorite. Honestly this made my day. I RED TONS OF STORIES FOR THIS CONTEST BUT YOURS TAKES THE CAKE. Good luck !

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over 4 years ago Lauren Owens said:

Aw that was cute :) good storyline

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over 4 years ago Melissa Moreno said:

I gave this a heart because the ending was very touching, but it was a lot of telling and not enough showing. You get to write 1200 words! You should use them to show as much of their love as possible. Show a scene at one of their dates or the first day they met. Something like that. But over all, it was a very sweet story. Good luck :)

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over 4 years ago Johanna Wood said:

This is nice. You did well with it and I enjoyed reading it. I didn't notice any grammatical errors. Best of luck in the contest! :)

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