This Love

This Love

1 chapter / 2904 words

Approximately 15 minutes to read

Description:

Six smoothie loving, coffee-binging, SAT studying friends with a bad case of senior-itis hurl their way through their last year of High School.

Genres:

Writing, Comedy, Romance

Comments(14)

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about 4 years ago Mathew Walczak said:

Ok so im lazy and ive given up on the editing thing :P

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about 4 years ago Mathew Walczak said:

2.) 5th paragraph: "It could have brought her mother to tears she thought she looked so pretty"

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about 4 years ago Mathew Walczak said:

So I've started to read and just because I can I've decided whenever I find an obvious grammatical error I'm going to comment it so you know for when you're editing this :)

1.) 3rd Paragraph "What would happen of Russian communists took over"

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over 4 years ago Alex M. Stache said:

Their crazy love of smoothies amuses me. Haha, love this story. Only thing, I became a little confusing reading each and everyone of the character's backstories. I think you should integrate some of the info into the actual story. Try to leave the explaining the characters to a minimum. (Sorry, I'm rambling, happens when I like a story. Hope this makes sense!)

Reviews(1)

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about 4 years ago Mathew Walczak said:

Ok sooooooo I really like how you write man even though the stroy may not interest me, and that's not because it's a bad or a boring story or anything. It's just that it's not the type of story that I generally like. But yeah, few grammatical errors and whatever but I'm sure you'll fix that right up :) Overall you just have a writing style that I like and you're getting pretty good at this I can see, keep up the good work! :) x