The Last Touch

The Last Touch

3 chapters / 897 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

When minds collide there is no telling what the future could hold.

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6 days ago josep said:

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7 days ago josep said:

ow much one person can probe another without danger, or just what is going on with Ms. Melee. However, EDDM menu printing

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20 days ago JDseo said:

It's not clear how people can judge the strength of each other's minds, plumbing

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23 days ago realname said:

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2 months ago figment said:

Try making their friendship a little more important than their romance. It needs to be more "I don't know what I would do without you" than "man, your hot". 5) Last but not least, I love your foreshadowing skills! It just feels so exciting when you give little hints of what is going to happen and put suspicions in my head. Keep doing that!ultrasound specialist salary

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almost 5 years ago Victoria Caslon said:

The first chapter is amazing - no wonder you won the contest! :D I found the second chapter fascinating, suspenseful, but confusing. It's not clear how people can judge the strength of each other's minds, how much one person can probe another without danger, or just what is going on with Ms. Melee. However, I'm sure you'll clear things up in the next chapters - I can't wait to read more!