The Last Touch

The Last Touch

3 chapters / 897 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

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When minds collide there is no telling what the future could hold.

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about 18 hours ago figment said:

, suspenseful, but confusing. It's not clear how people can judge the strength of each other's minds, how much one person can probe another without danger, or just what is going on with Ms. Melee. However, I'm sure you'll clear things up in the next chapters - I can't wait to read more!beta glukan

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over 4 years ago meggzz said:

how do you get so many readers for your story??

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over 4 years ago B. D. Legan said:

Wow. I loved the world you created, and your characters were allcomplex and believable. At the point you left it at, you need to write more! ;) -B.

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about 19 hours ago figment said:

Try making their friendship a little more important than their romance. It needs to be more "I don't know what I would do without you" than "man, your hot". 5) Last but not least, I love your foreshadowing skills! It just feels so exciting when you give little hints of what is going to happen and put suspicions in my head. Keep doing that!ultrasound specialist salary

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over 4 years ago Victoria Caslon said:

The first chapter is amazing - no wonder you won the contest! :D I found the second chapter fascinating, suspenseful, but confusing. It's not clear how people can judge the strength of each other's minds, how much one person can probe another without danger, or just what is going on with Ms. Melee. However, I'm sure you'll clear things up in the next chapters - I can't wait to read more!