Heart Stop

Heart Stop

1 chapter / 746 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

*Finalist in the Fan Fiction Contest.* When Jacob finds out the pain of imprinting on Bella, and the consequences of loving someone you only thought loved you.(Sorry for all those who don't like Twilight, which are most of you). I just started watching Twilight and I'm not saying I'm a fan, but I do admire Jacob! *notice: I wrote this after watching Eclipse. Now that I've seen Breaking Dawn, I know why everyone hates Twilight*

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over 4 years ago MJB said:

Wow, I did not expect to like this so much. I am not a fan of Twilight, and even if I was Jacob would be one of my least favorite characters. But in this story he seemed to make sense. You let the reader get into his head and understand his feelings. I like the style, the descriptions, everything about this story. Great job! Good luck in the contest!

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over 4 years ago aidan smith said:

I'm not really into Twilight (I always make the sparkly vampire jokes) but I did enjoy the wording of this story. It flowed well and with great effect, brought the story to life.

I'm not sure if this actually happened in the novels, or what, but it didn't sound like fanfiction to me. It sounded a prediction or something based on the book that you read. Usually fanfiction involves a self-made character...I really wasn't sure. You can disregard that if you want.

His passion was described beautifully, and I enjoyed reading that. (So glad it was about the werewolf and not the vampire) The tiny hints of description in between the narration made the whole story a seamless piece. Beautiful wording.