Heart Stop

Heart Stop

1 chapter / 746 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read


*Finalist in the Fan Fiction Contest.* When Jacob finds out the pain of imprinting on Bella, and the consequences of loving someone you only thought loved you.(Sorry for all those who don't like Twilight, which are most of you). I just started watching Twilight and I'm not saying I'm a fan, but I do admire Jacob! *notice: I wrote this after watching Eclipse. Now that I've seen Breaking Dawn, I know why everyone hates Twilight*

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over 4 years ago Lily Chen said:

If you've never read/seen Breaking Dawn, then it makes sense why you had Jacob imprint on Bella. But it honestly doesn't seem very accurate or realistic in comparison to the books/movies. But nevertheless, it was extremely well-written and you really embodied Jacob in his narration. You did depict his love for her quite well, other than the part where you said he watched her in her sleep. But your descriptions and imagery were good and it flowed well. Great job, and I wish you the best of luck in your contest!


over 4 years ago Magnus Chase said:

Not a twilight fan but it was pretty good. Just make it longer, but awesome job! :)