The Girl in the Orphan Clothes

The Girl in the Orphan Clothes

1 chapter / 12 words

Approximately less than 5 seconds to read

Description:

Imagery, imagery, imagery. Pay attention to the imagery, dear reader. This is biblical, so this might confuse you if you're not a Christian. This was one of the finalists in the Inkhaiku contest.

Genres:

Horror, Poetry, Religious
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over 2 years ago Maryam Naz said:

Brilliant haiku :)

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about 3 years ago Linda D said:

Ah! Eve.

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over 3 years ago Nikki Massey said:

i feel like im missing something......like the rest of the poem.....i only see 3 lines.

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almost 4 years ago PandaAsiran said:

I must say, this is very in-depth. Bravo, for introducing so much hidden meaning in a haiku.

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about 3 years ago Avalon Nightwick said:

Her sin chains her to exile from heaven because she is not a daughter of Christ (she is an orphan, in fact) and Satan is happy about.

This is the most brilliant poem (any sort of poem) I have ever read. So very, very clever the imagery is so fraking powerful and most people won't understand it because of its religious context.

B L O O D Y B R I L L I A N T

This is officially the best of not only the writing you have posted on your wall, but also quite possibly the entirety of Figment.

A+++ for you.

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over 3 years ago Crystal Rose Selburn said:

This was a brilliant piece of work from a brilliant writer, this blows my mind. Like what was said before me, this is an interesting piece. Thank you for publishing it and inspiring. :)