The One I love is...

The One I love is...

1 chapter / 746 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

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FanFicContest entry. Katniss has always been torn between Peeta and Gale, but when she finally chooses her one true love, her choice is unexpected...

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over 4 years ago Sally Balboa said:

That was great. My only thing is that the characters didn't sound like themselves. But it was so funny that you don't even care until your done reading it and then you get that "That's not right." feeling.

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over 4 years ago Jessie R. H. said:

This was a cute, lovely story. I adore "The Hunger Games" and I adore this story. I almost laughed out loud. I found it so funny and sweet. Fantastic job. :)

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over 4 years ago Lenore Snow said:

I love it. I almost laughed out loud at "Let's take this outside..." You do have one teensy little typo: 'Paname' should be 'Panem,' but apart from that, it was flawless. Good luck in the contest!

-- Len

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over 4 years ago Eileen said:

Um, YES. This is fantastic! Peeta and Gale arguing...that was just hilarious. "At least I got chosen for the Hunger Games!" "That doesn't even make sense!" TEAM BREAD!!! :) •Eileen• P.S. Good luck in the contest. P.P.S. I almost never vote in heart-based contests... but this is just too good to go un-hearted. :)

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over 4 years ago A. Gold said:

I was surprised at how awesomely funny this was. At first, I was thinking, "Why are the characters so... off -character?" And then I kept reading. And laughing. And laughing some more. I got it: it's not meant to be on par with the theme of the Hunger Games! I loved the parody fan-fic...I think when Katniss jumped out the window with the bread was the best part. Hopefully, more people will be drawn to voting for this piece!

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over 4 years ago ❄️orEOcookie99❄️ said:

HILARIOUS. By far the best Hunger Games fanfiction I've ever read. I love the lines "I've loved her since I heard her sing" and "At least I got chosen for the Hunger Games" "That doesn't even make even sense!" And the ending was a complete shocker, I thought it was going to be like Haymitch or something. My only critique is that it was a liiitle bit silly at times, but I mean come on this is Figment, so yeah :).