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I am personifying silence. I hope you enjoy it! :)
about 3 years ago Laura-Style said:
Add more to it.
about 3 years ago Eileen said:
I agree. You asked me to read it, and I expected it to be longer, but well done. :)
over 3 years ago Madeline Nixon said:
I liked it. Good job.
over 3 years ago Becca Hyer said:
Wow. It's short but it packs a powerful punch.
over 2 years ago MrMrs.Bones said:
Though it is simply a few verses, the message in this poem is so alive I cannot even begin to describe it. You have a wonderful talent and I hope you continue to write beautiful things!
over 3 years ago Alison Ryu said:
I love the title in relation to the poem. And the last line of this was a great way to finish because it leaves us with a really eerie image of silence. One thing is - I don't know if this fully embodies the idea of loneliness. I see how you were aiming to capture that emotion, but I think you were stronger in conveying silence. Either way, it's a brilliant haiku and very well done. Good luck :)