Empty Heart

Empty Heart

1 chapter / 15 words

Approximately less than 10 seconds to read

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© 2013 For Ink Haiku contest. It's been a while since I've written haiku but I still think they're a beautiful form of poetry.

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Writing, Poetry

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Comments(12)

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over 4 years ago Chloe Calhoun said:

This is great! That last line is what makes this piece. Now I want to know what happens! The second line didn't really make sense to me. Maybe 'Only filled by the cold (or maybe dark) void' would make more sense, but maybe it just went over my head. Anyway, great!

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over 4 years ago Kierstyn said:

Lovely haiku, it was very good and unique to the other haiku contest entries I've read. Good luck!

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over 4 years ago Alex M. Stache said:

I like this, very beautiful...yet sad, imagery. Great job and good luck!

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over 4 years ago M.H. said:

This is fantastic! I'm terrible at reading into poetry and writing it, too, but I have to say that I love the flow and find the imagery to be wonderful. :) Well done!

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