A Reason to Liv

A Reason to Liv

1 chapter / 499 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

A fan fiction of Fire by Kristen Cashore

Comments(17)

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over 4 years ago Katherine Ellig said:

I haven't read "Fire," but I still enjoyed this story and understood what was going on. Great descriptions, and very cute story!

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over 4 years ago Kaitie Lysaght said:

I haven't read what this comic is based in, but I liked it. The relationship between the mother and father are cute. The themes are clear enough, even if some if the dialogue is shaky at times. But I think that's the sign if a great fanfic when you don't necessarily new to be familiar with the source material to enjoy the work. Good luck I the contest :)

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over 4 years ago Danielle Lofgren said:

Nice word play! I read the first hundred pages of Fire after having loved Graceling, but just couldn't get into it. Great job with this story, and good luck with your contest!

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over 4 years ago Tiffany Jessica said:

Wow, I've read "Fire," and this ties in awesome-ly. Great job on it!!

Reviews(3)

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over 4 years ago Mae Winchester said:

This is a really well written story! The descriptions are wonderful! The only thing you need to change are the spaces between the paragraphs. Please just put one line between each paragraph so it is easier to read.

I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes, so good job on that. And good luck in the contest!

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over 4 years ago Trisha Wood said:

You described everything very well. I had a clear image in my mind of what was going on. The only problem I have with this is some of the dialog. I wouldn't change your descriptions or anything but I would go back on the dialog and make things flow more easily