Behind The Glass

Behind The Glass

2 chapters / 341 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

*****Ronnie Taleon made the cover*****

Comments(15)

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over 3 years ago Casey Williams said:

Interesting, just one quick thing that doesn't make a difference. In chapter 1 change 10AM to 10PM! Love it so far though.

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over 5 years ago Madi Leigh Persinger said:

This is soo good! Continue to write more, please :) My only complain is that it moves a little too fast. Go more into history of WHY boys and girls are separated.

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over 5 years ago Cait Cher said:

I'm interested in a dystopian story any day. Write more.

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almost 6 years ago Anna Browne said:

This is an interesting pov and I like ur imagery and cover- nice :)

Here for the swap! Please read my two most recent stories! Thx!

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over 5 years ago Alia R. said:

awe, this was adorable =) It's a little to fast though...i think you could add to the first chapter so we get to know the character better, but other than that i love the idea! two thumbs and a toe up!