5 chapters / 1775 words

Approximately 9 minutes to read


When Kylie's family has been missing for five days she must get help from everyone she knows even if one of them is her worst enemy so her goal is to keep her promise to find her family and their napper. Read this book to see if she can actually find her family and to keep her promise. (Give some hearts and cookies to Kitty Kat for the awesome cover THANKS!!!!!!!)



about 4 years ago Raina Rivers said:

This has a lot of potential as an adventure story. Nice detail.


about 4 years ago Allie said:

You have an excellent writing style and your stories just flow, I love that and this is sad and detailed nicely :)


about 4 years ago Aennli Sky said:

I love the overall story and the characters! The thing is, you just kind of say what's happening. To make it more engaging I would go back and explain what's happening gradually throughout the story which you're already doing a bit anyways and you probably could just take out the first paragraph. There's a couple grammar mistakes too but a quick scan through your story will fix that up. It's a good start so far!

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about 4 years ago Alex Phillips said:

I like the plot. I think Austin and Kylie's friendship is adorable. Also, everyone's right, you need to work on your grammer, but everything else is great! Keep working on this!



about 4 years ago M A Haidar said:

Impressive! You just gave us enough information in the first chapter for us to start a journey through your plot! The action was awesome and the descriptions were even more awesome! I love your style and the you expressed the main character that I can clearly predict that I will love when I read more of this work! Great!


about 4 years ago Keith Surratt said:

wow impresive