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A winner of the Summer Flash contest.
4 months ago Emily Olson said:
Exactly what is going through my head for the upcoming school year. Really great descriptions. Wonderful work. :)
4 months ago K Garlock said:
I like the second-to-last line.
4 months ago Briana Colfer said:
Amazing picture you painted. Makes me depressed though.: )
4 months ago Aviline said:
Wow. I love your descriptions. This is beautiful.
Congrats on winning. You deserve to win. This was amazing.
4 months ago JillRam said:
In a very short amount of time, you were able to capture the expectancy and apprehension of students everywhere. This was great.
What I loved was what was between the lines - though you mostly describe scenes, it still evokes an emotion.
All in all, really great.