The Doctor and I

The Doctor and I

9 chapters / 1614 words

Approximately 8 minutes to read

Description:

A book based on the British show Doctor Who

Comments(17)

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over 3 years ago MissElleMarie said:

I wish I could sit down and read this, but it is moving way too fast for my taste. If you slow it down and fix the mistakes, then you should let me know.

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over 3 years ago Ally Beaulieu said:

Don't forget to use paragraphs whenever a new character speaks. Also, I think the story moved along quite fastly. But you do have some increlibly good ideas!

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about 4 years ago Jack Edmondson said:

Seriously liked this! Dr Who is really good and I think you captured it well, but it did go very fast! Calm down dude! Really cool book:)

Cow

about 4 years ago Jack Edmondson said:

Seriously liked this! Dr Who is really good and I think you captured it well, but it did go very fast! Calm down dude! Really cool book:)

Reviews(1)

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almost 5 years ago Theresa Alef said:

I love Doctor Who, but this moves too fast for my taste. Slow it down. Every time a different character speaks, make it a new paragraph. Also, don't use quotes from the show, it just sounds wrong in a story and it's also stealing. Make your own! :)