So I Think We Should Run

So I Think We Should Run

1 chapter / 132 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(2)

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about 3 years ago Just Passing By said:

Love the rhyming and repetition. Great job! Also your cover is real nice

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over 4 years ago J. Li said:

This poem was excellently written. The rhymes were natural and didn't feel forced. I love how you led the reader in a false zone of happiness at the beginning and then produce darker themes (pulling out the gun) near the end. It allows the poem to cover a wide range of emotions and ends with a sense of strong finality. Again, great job!

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