What Used to Be

What Used to Be

1 chapter / 274 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

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Writing, Poetry

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almost 4 years ago Mercury Winters said:

That was a truly lovely and moving poem- I like your format and your repetitiveness, excellent read :)

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almost 4 years ago Jessi Lynn said:

This is beautiful. I feel your pain (literally). I'm very sorry for your loss.

I actually started tearing up from reading this, because tomorrow is three years past when my best friend died and you described my emotions exactly.

Well done.

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almost 4 years ago Tori Bowers said:

I felt pain when I read this and tears filled my eyes. This poem is absolutely powerful, beautiful, and sad. The way you done the breaks also added to the power, beauty, flow, and uniqueness of this piece. You're a very talented author. I know that your friend's death has left you hurting but you turned it into a meaningful, powerful poem. I'm sure she would be very pleased with it. Don't ever stop writing.

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almost 4 years ago Gabrielle Clarkson said:

Wow.

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over 3 years ago vghdthdth said:

Wow. That was really great. The repetition worked beautifully. I really liked what you did with the three lines every once and a while. I have no idea what that's called but I love seeing it in poems. I liked this a lot and don't have anything I really think you should change about it :)

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almost 4 years ago Addie Anne said:

Incredibly touching and beautiful. Love the raw emotions felt in the simplest of words. I also like the spacing and structure of the poem; it helps it to flow and read quite well. Keep up your hat work it was a pleasure to read.