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This is a piece that’s really special to me. I don’t write poetry often, but I couldn't let this go untold. It’s a true story, written backstage at a rehearsal. I hope it inspires you. I hope it makes you feel warm.

I'd really like some honest critique on this. I'm especially interested in making the ending stronger. Maybe a title change? Feedback is appreciated, thank you!



almost 4 years ago Morgan T. Summer said:

I really liked it, I really do. Though I feel like your telling and not showing. I want to feel like I'm there experiencing it with you. Right now I feel like I'm just reading something. It is an amazing start! keep it up!!!


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