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everything was going smoothly for Abigail Thorn... until she,um, died.
almost 5 years ago Aria_Lee93 said:
How do I read the next chapters? The first chapter was really good :)
about 5 years ago Allykat said:
Interesting story, can't wait to read more. It's a nice take on the whole guardian angel deal. I really like your main character's voice in this.
over 5 years ago Anne Rayne said:
Poor Maggie! Please publish chapters 2 and 3! I love it!
over 5 years ago Miserable Existence said:
Haha, dying can certainly put a damped on anyone's day! Really creative idea and I just love the title - "Abiglail Secondchance". A really interesting protagonist and I can't wait to read your newer chapters once you release them!
Your fellow invader,
over 5 years ago Cecile said:
Really good, I love the narration :)
Just a few things to note-
"were" at the lake, not where
"too" bad, not to
Capatalize the F in "fine" and the M for "Maggie", the "S" in survived should be lower case
I loved it, keep writing :)