Body in the Woods

Body in the Woods

13 chapters / 32227 words

Approximately about 3 hours to read

Description:

*Cover by Hannah*
Feight Alex never thought she was anything special, never dreamed she could possibly be anything but what she is; some random middle class girl. No one of importance. That is, until she finds a body in the woods and everything changes. A hidden past is revealed, an old evil will make an appearance, and secrets are uncovered. Secrets that will change Feight forever.
(P.S. I know about the typos)

Genres:

Fantasy, Romance, Comedy

Comments(4)

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almost 3 years ago Petty said:

(Maniacal laugh) Yes! It happened! I've been waiting for the kiss! Oh, and the laughing scene is just too funny. Laughing is so painful, I have no idea why it's a good thing. Or even just a thing.

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almost 3 years ago Sophia♩♪♫♬ said:

I love this! (Im only on chapter one) but it is really intriguing!!! One comment is that "I like your hair (,)" said the boy. Use a comma instead of a period. I will finish!! Eventually... But I really like it so far!!

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over 3 years ago Krystal Fragoso said:

Your writing style is just fantastic. A few grammar mistakes, mostly with dialogue, but that's about it. When writing dialogue, use a comma. "I can't go faster," he said. Beautiful descriptions, and I loved how you didn't dump everything on the reader right away. You kept it a mystery. Nicely done.

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over 3 years ago Whimsy said:

Creeped out already by the title, but very good so far :)

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almost 2 years ago Michelle Higbee said:

This is truly an amazing story. Love the premise and I absolutely LOVE the mc. Her thought processes are so hilarious but also endearing as well. Can't wait for the rest !!

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almost 3 years ago Sammi L. said:

This is amazing! I really enjoyed reading it (I got through the first couple of chapters, but I'm kind of busy, so I'll have to come back some other time to read the rest!). I am incredibly intrigued by the plot, and the title of your story is very fitting and straight to the point. Your description is excellent; it's easy to visualise what's happening, and understand what your mc is feeling. I liked the prologue -that set the scene nicely. For some reason I thought Feight (unique spelling, by the way) was a guy at the start. I don't know why. There are a few minor errors throughout the piece, typos most likely, though you already know about those, so I won't say anything :)

There was just one small thing which kind of irked me though. During chapter one when the mc was seeing the past (at least that's what I assume it is), you use the phrase 'the newborn infant whom also had pure white skin'. What irked me was the 'whom'. The difference between 'whom' and 'who' still confuses me. Like, a lot. I don't know why, but I feel as though the 'whom' should be a 'who'. Maybe just check it out (because I might be completely wrong). It just doesn't sound right to me.

Anyway, your dialogue seems to flow naturally, and you do a brilliant job with showing and not telling. I really liked your writing style, and your characters have been introduced well. Overall, I loved this, and will most certainly come back to read on as soon as I get the chance. Great job&keep writing!