A Different Kind of Wonder

A Different Kind of Wonder

1 chapter / 502 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

A poem about the dark side of growing up, and growing apart, as seen through Wonderland.

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(19)

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about 5 years ago Lola The Lunatic O.o said:

AHHH! LOVE THIS! I originally read this like a year ago and then i forgot what it was called but i remember how it went but i just spent an hour looking for it because i want to read it at my poetry slam and I found it :)))))

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almost 6 years ago Liberty J T said:

In the second paragraph, I would say: ...they have traded in their dolls for crying babies... You put the "for" on the line above which makes it get an uneasy kind of flow. Other than that, magnificent!

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almost 6 years ago Cailee Goddard said:

I absolutely love this. It has such a great meaning. I've never thought to compare Alice in Wonderland to the actions of younger teens now a days. Great story. (:

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almost 6 years ago A.S.M. Michellins said:

This is really cool. It's so full of depth and the metaphors are so sophisticated, the pacing is perfect, it's a really good poem. One of the better on this site, if you ask me.

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almost 6 years ago Liberty J T said:

Also this: Others won’t bother to float. Some will dance with

The little oysters at the bottom, which make Change to: Others won't..... some will dance WITH the little oysters.... for better flow

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over 6 years ago Jessie Todd said:

Very good poem Britt! I can think of a certain student body that would benefit from hearing it!