The End

The End

7 chapters / 2856 words

Approximately 14 minutes to read

Description:

Everyone in New York City has left in The Mass Exodus, and Aimee and her little sister, Ava, are left alone to fight the battle with hunger.
I haven't finished it yet, but I'm adding a little more every day. Also, don't be afraid to be mean, tell the truth ;)

If you like my story, tell you friends on Figment about it, so they can read it too. :)

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over 5 years ago Nikki Hodgkins said:

I've only read up to chapter four, since I feel like that's a good place to pause and decide whether or not I plan to continue reading. I do intend to do that but I will keep my review to the first few chapters.

I love the concept, a mass exodus isn't something I've read about before. I also adore the fact it's in first person, but I would like to say remember that with writing in first person tenses are super important. One little mess up can really confuse a reader. Thankfully, I didn't really find any.

The downfall I ran into was the grammatical errors that started to appear in chapter two and on. They're not entirely noticeable, but they do slow down the fast paced vibe of the story. I truly recommend going back through and spell-checking a few things. :]

Overall, it's lovely and I plan to continue reading.

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over 5 years ago Anna Briar said:

Amazing and very scary. I enjoyed it. :) But PLEASE don't make a sad ending. This sounds like I am a Legend and that movie made me cry really hard . . . -_-