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over 3 years ago Lindsey Proper said:
Pretty good. I would be curious to see how you continue writing this, although the voice of it doesn't quite feel authentic. The POV shift at the end contributes to this feeling, I think. Either way, it is quite well written. Keep writing. :)
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